I wish I could say I liked this book. There are a few things it did well,
but the shadow of the mundane was strong. I nearly gave up after chapter 6. I did
enjoy the writing itself. At first. He focused too much on the finer details of
the characters and that slowed down the whole novel. One thing that was hard to
get through the lack of “brain candy”: I was given the answers instead of
having to think about the text.
Wayne was too much of a sketch and an archetype. True, several of his
characteristics were terrifying: his apathy, his willingness to give himself to
his anger, and his darker fantasies. He also displays sociopath tendencies.
He read more like a profile than an actual person.
Rule on almost the same hand, was just as lackluster as Wayne. Both were
willing participants of their anger, but Rule fantasized about punching people
out. His machismo just made me want to throw may hands up when he was first
introduced. I needed more, so much more. Rule is the character who is more
interested in his own image than being an actual human being and doing his damned
job. He was just “one of the guys”.
The female character in this novel were just as flat. I detested the way
Ketchum had this archetypal damsel in distress framework. It was like they were
just there to fill space. There isn’t much I can say for or against their characterization.
There may not have been any. I wanted to feel for them, but there wasn’t much
to attach to.
When first reading this, I got chills. But they were short lived. The
change in tone is what took me out of this novel. My expectations were a bit
too high, it seems. I am loathing to say this: this novel was one of those
things that seems like a generic version of something.
Introduction of new character could have been handled far better. They all
bled together after chapter 4 or 5. With so many other insignificant details
floating and flying around, it was difficult to distinguish characters. They
didn’t hold that spark writers like King or Murakami give their characters. They
felt like stage props: there for a small purpose, but not much else. In another
sense, they were those extra’s in a film. Filler.
If there is anything to take away from this novel, it should be this: its
function was to entertain. It did that. However, with the lack of
characterization, that entertainment value decreases, and a reader just goes along
for a kiddie ride of sorts, where the track is before them to see. There are
few novels that didn’t give a feeling of exasperation after reading them. This
is one such novel. Perhaps I am not the target reader.
Honestly, I wasn't too interested in the premise of the book when I read the synopsis. It just seemed so painfully average. Unfortunately, the rest of the book was pretty much the same, which is a shame, because I really like reading about psychopaths murdering people.
ReplyDeleteI couldn't agree with you more. You said it perfectly. The prologue sets you up for a thrilling ride along and leaves you with the taste of saltines and American cheese in your mouth--boring and generic. Flat, clichéd characters and a plot pieced together from two true life crimes leaves you with a sum that is much less than the value of it's parts.
ReplyDelete"Brain candy" is an excellent description of the details we get to chew on and try to figure out. Actually, it's a great term for a lot of the more enjoyable pieces of a novel. And I completely agree that this novel was lacking in those sweet little pieces. The characters weren't nearly as unique as I prefer, and the plot was too easily spoon-fed to us.
ReplyDelete